Critique

Week 2

During class today I had a one on one with one of my lecturers he voiced his concern with how my brochure could start looking very similar with my subject being "stargazing". He also suggested using my galaxy illustration as my white page and continuing it through my compositions as a way of overcoming that.

He also suggested taking it back to the drawing board and sketching up some composition ideas. 

Week 3

The class had an interim presentation where we had to lay out our spreads alongside a critique sheet where other classmates and our lectures wrote down what works and what could use work. I benefited from this immensely as it helped me redirect what I should be focussing on, in this case my hierarchy and text. 

I had a lot of feedback in terms of my design and approach to my locations
Everyone liked my designs, some found it a bit intense, but my text was the main thing letting me down, as it was obvious I didn't put as much work into it as my collages.

WEEK 5

I had a one on one with my tutor and he was still struggling to read my text and was concerned about my font size and leading. So I ditched the blue semi-transparent strip and replaced it with a black strip as my solution while increasing the leading in-between my text and bumping up my font size.